If
What if, instead of dying flowers, perfume
smelled like mountaintops, like granite
and fir-filtered wind? Breezes lift our feet
from the rock and fragrance-scented air
buoys us up over golden rows of mountains.
You laugh like a child taking his first step
out onto the taut surface of water
and instead of sinking, we skate
on that tensile surface that quivers
like my heart when you reach
the long pin feathers of your wings
and wrap them all light and tickle
and remember around me.
Mary Stebbins Taitt
for Keith
first poem on Ipad,
1000618-1557-2b(3), 100617
16 comments:
Thanks, Jennie. :-)
Inspiring. Your prose evoked inner feelings.
Looking forward to reading more.
Best wishes,
D.
Just stopped by as I was surfing blogs. Wanted to say I enjoyed reading your posts. Stop by sometime and say hello.
Happy New Year! May your 2011 be filled with many successes and much happiness!
D
Thanks, Crooked and D!
I cal it a poem, but I'm glad you liked it.
J'ai lu ce, encore et encore. Il remorqueurs toujours à mes chaînes coeur. De telles pensées belle prose douce et tendre.
I'm sorry, allow me to translate my comment above:
"I read this over and over again. It always tugs at my heart strings. Such beautiful prose, thoughts sweet and tender."
I love the romance languages - no pun intended. I guess from my scientific background in Latin. I also might surprise you with a snippet of Russian or Japanese. HA!
Best wishes, ... D.
wow very inspiring blog.
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Woow! What Can I Say! You are really a very talented writer and you have your own way to let people feel and here your words and inner feelings...That's amazing...I really wish you the best of the bests and a life full of joy, peace and happiness....
Best Regards...
Your newest Follower and Reader...
Nihal Elahmadi
Thank you! :-D you are too kind. Been too busy to post much lately!
Fantastic work full of creativity. Congratulations. Continue your path!
Thank you so much Mejor!!! I appreciate you kind words!!!
nice ,,,,
Beautifully written.
Thanks for stopping by to visit. I could not reply to your comment. I would love to hear more about your time with horses.
love it! keep it up. :)
Cool! That was really great.
Thank all of you for your kind comments!!!
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